Okay, I'm definitely seeing a lot of problems with similar looking/sounding words (soaring instead of snoring, opinion instead of option), but that and some tensing issues actually seem to be the only thing grammatically wrong.
At least it looks like we'll be getting some action soon, if Nightmare Moon's debut is anything to go by.
Okay, I'm definitely seeing a lot of problems with similar looking/sounding words (soaring instead of snoring, opinion instead of option), but that and some tensing issues actually seem to be the only thing grammatically wrong.
At least it looks like we'll be getting some action soon, if Nightmare Moon's debut is anything to go by.
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M'kay thanks I'm going over it now and I do see the issues.