You know what? I think I want to find more about Spike and Rarity than anything else. It had Soul laughing, I am pretty I will laugh too, even if it is serious as fuck. I love bad things...
And more strangely, who is the "stud" that Rarity basically dumped Spike for, and we got to see Spike's girlfriend. On the Rarity front, I hope it isn't Fancy Pants--you already have it that she and Fleur de Lis are proprietors of a boutique in Canterlot similar to Carousel Boutique. Having Fancy as Rarity's boyfriend/husband just pisses me off to no end, and it just seems too obvious and predictable.
Also, I see that we have a few potential interspecies relationships. Does this mean that they can cross breed? Because if that's the case, then I can't really see Spike getting a dragonness as a girlfriend (obviously, it wouldn't be because only he could mate another dragon and have kids, he could have fucked Rarity before he and her broke up) and Spike verbally tearing Rarity a new one. Seriously, that needs a chapter to itself, or at least its own side-story, since obviously Soul knows the whole story.
“Ummm...thanks? So, how’s Spike?” Soul asked having a feeling that he shouldn’t.
You really shouldn’t.
Rarity’s body suddenly tensed up, her horn glowing an eerie blue, but as soon as it happened it was gone. “Spike is doing just fine.” Rarity said in a slight huff. “Why do you ask?”
Pup, listen to me don’t say anything about you know who.
I’m not...maybe.
“Oh no real reason. Just wanted to know how the guy is doing, it’s not everyday you meet another dragon.” You’ve done it now.
This time it was Rarity whose eye started to violently twitch, remembering that faithful day Spike told her off. “Why Spike is doing just fine.” As much as she tried to hide it, Rarity hands started to shake in rage.
“I see, well that’s good to know.” Soul said, turning his back against the counter. “Still can’t believe that he that’s it’s almost been three months.” Soul nonchalantly said scratching his chin as if he was in deep thought. “He’s became a real dragon hasn’t he?”
Pretty good update but what's with the font ?
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I have no idea, I've tried changing it. Maybe I'll try again later.
3532683col I was just curious...... keep up the work I'm enjoying the story so far
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Thanks I try my best.
3532866 your wlecome buddy
dude we need back story on this guy you can make a hole fic on just how he showed up and Spike gets a hot dragon girl
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Don't worry I have that in the works, but I'm going to let this story grow first then back story time.
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You know what? I think I want to find more about Spike and Rarity than anything else. It had Soul laughing, I am pretty I will laugh too, even if it is serious as fuck. I love bad things...
So Spike told off Rarity cause of the way she always strung him along to get free labor out of him?
Seriously need an editor. Tons of obvious spelling errors.
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That seems like a hole-in-one right there, bub.
And more strangely, who is the "stud" that Rarity basically dumped Spike for, and we got to see Spike's girlfriend. On the Rarity front, I hope it isn't Fancy Pants--you already have it that she and Fleur de Lis are proprietors of a boutique in Canterlot similar to Carousel Boutique. Having Fancy as Rarity's boyfriend/husband just pisses me off to no end, and it just seems too obvious and predictable.
Also, I see that we have a few potential interspecies relationships. Does this mean that they can cross breed? Because if that's the case, then I can't really see Spike getting a dragonness as a girlfriend (obviously, it wouldn't be because only he could mate another dragon and have kids, he could have fucked Rarity before he and her broke up) and Spike verbally tearing Rarity a new one. Seriously, that needs a chapter to itself, or at least its own side-story, since obviously Soul knows the whole story.
Seriously, WRITE THAT STORY!!!