It feels a bit short.. the scene in the kitchen felt more as the meat of this chapter rather then the Baths. The sex itself also felt shorter then Fluttershy or Rarity and lacking in emotional connection compared to the other two chapters.
3598437 Yeah, I had some trouble writing this. It could be that I'm really sore or just couldn't get into it this chapter. Sorry if it didn't make expectations. Maybe the next will be better.
Celestia making the main six her broodmares without needing to rape them... Words can't explain how much I love the idea of this.
I really like this, a few spelling/grammar mistakes but overall that's my only complaint! Now how will she fare against the other half?
I also for some reason came up with a troll ending where Celestia is trying to find Twi(last one left) only to walk into luna's room right when she takes twi for herself.
3598734 The way I've been thinking about it Luna might not be futa. I have a idea that there might be a bouns chapter where Luna and Celestia get together. As I said before its only an idea.
3599835 I don't fricken know. Lol its just ideas at this point I've even had people say I should do the CMC! But I digress some of them would be really fun to write. I'll think on it
can you add the CMC in future chapters for this story too or not
3598243 I don't know that's foal-con and im not sure I wanna stray into that territory. I was thinking about adding Luna though.
3598261 ok and maybe you up the ages of the CMC in this story and add them to future chapters for this story so Celestia can do it to them also
3598276 I don't know, it's a maybe. Just a maybe.
3598287 ok
It feels a bit short.. the scene in the kitchen felt more as the meat of this chapter rather then the Baths.
The sex itself also felt shorter then Fluttershy or Rarity and lacking in emotional connection compared to the other two chapters.
3598437 Yeah, I had some trouble writing this. It could be that I'm really sore or just couldn't get into it this chapter. Sorry if it didn't make expectations. Maybe the next will be better.
Are we possibly going to have some clop with the preggers mane6... that would be kinda awsome.
Celestia making the main six her broodmares without needing to rape them... Words can't explain how much I love the idea of this.
I really like this, a few spelling/grammar mistakes but overall that's my only complaint! Now how will she fare against the other half?
I also for some reason came up with a troll ending where Celestia is trying to find Twi(last one left) only to walk into luna's room right when she takes twi for herself.
3598734 The way I've been thinking about it Luna might not be futa. I have a idea that there might be a bouns chapter where Luna and Celestia get together. As I said before its only an idea.
3598624 Who knows? Cause I don't
yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssss FINALY 2 WEAKS LATER AND ITS HERE!!!
3599699 I know it was late, I'm sorry.
How about Cadence?
3599807 Cadence already has Shining but maybe she wants a new toy? I don't know. Could be fun to write.
3599821 Chrysalis then?
3599835 I don't fricken know. Lol its just ideas at this point I've even had people say I should do the CMC! But I digress some of them would be really fun to write. I'll think on it
3599844 Well at least I didn't suggest Spike that would be awkward. Maybe Daring Do? Hmm...now that has some potential.
3599868 Lol, if anybody even asked me to write spike i'd Be "FUCK NO!" but yea theres quite a lot of potential for other mares. Only time will tell
3600423 Wait, did you vote down on it?
Where's Fluttershy? Wasn't she in the room as well?