Caramel Apple Acres

by NightFirethePegasus

Chapter 1

The first rays of Celestia's sun filtered in through the window in Big Macintosh's room at Sweet Apple Acres. As the red stallion gazed down at the Caramel colored pony asleep in his forelegs a smile crept onto his lips. It was moments like this, Mac thought to himself how glad he was that he was a farmpony, as this meant that his internal clock was set for him to wake up a good hour before Caramel. He loved nothing more in the morning before work than to cuddle his fast asleep coltfriend, nothing except,

"Mmmh good morning Mac..."

Caramel said softly as he awoke causing Mac's smile to grow wider, to anypony else that voice would have sounded like anypony else but not to Mac, to Mac it was the sweetest thing his ears had ever heard, to Mac the voice was as sweet as the candy the pony's name represented. Leaning in Mac placed his lips over Caramel's and gave him a kiss, Caramel's senses were flooded, the scent and taste of apples filling his body with warmth as Mac kissed him, but just as quickly as the sensation came it had retreated as Mac broke the kiss, Caramel sighed dreamily,

"Well... that's a real sweet way to say good morning."

He said with a yawn, still a tad sleepy. Caramel wasn't an early morning pony like the members of apple family were.

"Breakfast is up, you two get yer flanks down'ere 'fore it get's cold!"

Applejack's voice came from downstairs,

"That... not so much.."

Caramel grumbled as his ears rang. Big Mac chuckled as he and Caramel rolled out of bed, wincing when he heard a thud,

"Ya'll alrigh' sugarcube?"

He asked turning his head ta see Caramel getting up after falling on his face trying to get out of bed the caramel colored stallion simply nodded walking to be at Mac's side as the larger stallion slipped his yoke around his neck,

"Eeeyup well, Ah've learned tha' despite bein' a farmpony A.j. ain't the best mornin' mare, so ah learned mighty fast tha' when she calls fer breakfast t'is best not ta keep'er waitin' less ya'll wanna end up two apples short o' an apple pie if'n ya'll catch mah drift."

Mac said, chuckling as caramel crossed his hind legs and gulped in utter fear,

"W-w-well what're we waiting for then let's eat!"

With that Caramel took off at top speed down the stairs. Mac shook his head as he thought to himself,

'An accident prone stallion, running top speed down a flight o' stairs.'

"This ain't gonna end well."

He mumbled aloud to himself before following Caramel to breakfast.

Applejack turned to inspect a loud Crash that sounded from the bottom of the stairs only to find a certain tan pony laying dazed, upside down at the foot of the stairs,

"What in tarnation, Caramel what in the hay happened?"

She questioned Caramel as he got to his feet.

"I-I'm sorry A.j. I didn't mean to be late to breakfast..."

Caramel stuttered out apologetically. A.j. looked puzzled at Caramel, 'Caramel can be apologetic.' She thought to herself, 'But he seems outright terrified o' me righ' now.... an'.... is he... shakin'?'

"Caramel yer actin' mighty strange what's gotten inta ya?"

Big Mac approached his sister whispering in her ear explaining what he told to Caramel, this however only earned him one of her hooves to the back of his head and a glare,

"What did ya'll go an' tell'im tha' fer?!"

She turned apologetically to Caramel,

"Mah brother was jus' pullin' yer hoof ta get ya'll outta bed."

She turned back to Mac who still seemed to be hiding traces of snickering,

"Well, ah already finished breakfast so ah'm gonna get ta work, Mac ya'll have a half day today jus' clear a row o' apple trees an' take the rest o' the day off."

With that the orange mare grabbed an apple to munch on and went out the door. The two stallions both served themselves up a bowl of oatmeal and sat at the table,

"Mornin uncle Caramel."

Applebloom called from across the table where she was doing some last minute homework, Caramel wasn't really her uncle she just took to calling him that and he never seemed to mind Applebloom loved her uncle Caramel,

"Good morning Applebloom how's the crusading going?"

Caramel asked the little yellow filly, taking another bite of his oatmeal, he loved the apple family's oatmeal it had just the right amount of apple and cinnamon flavor in it he had asked Granny Smith for the recipe once, she had told him that it was an apple family secret if he wanted it he'd have to become an apple.

"Well today we are meeting Miss Octavia at her house after school to try fer our music cutie marks before she leaves fer her business trip, hey uncle Caramel can ah ask ya somethin'?"

She turned a tad red as she asked. Caramel's attention was now completely on the filly's as was Mac's,

"Sure A.B. what's up?"

"Well ah was wonderin' when are you an' mah brother gonna get married?"

Caramel's jaw went slack. While Mac nearly choked on his oatmeal,

"Well, uh A.B., I don't know but when we do I promise you'll be my bestmare now get to school."

Caramel said finally recovering from shock, and regaining his speaking ability as he shooed the filly out the door, while Mac put the dishes in the sink. Mac cleared his throat,

"Well..., let's get ta work, the sooner we finish, the more time we have to ourselves."

He said as the two went out to the orchard for work.

(There we go ch.1 is done how was it comments? Complaints?

see ya next time,

N.B.)

Author's Note:

I apologize for this chapter being so short, I'm kinda new to this I was inspired to start writing thanks to Stormsoul22 and his works such as winding roads so please any comments and reviews are welcome but please be nice about it constructive criticisms okay but being a jerk is not

Comments

[Sindal]

Somethigna bout this fic seems very oddly familiar...
must be my imagination

[Fley_The_Dragon]

Too many grammatical and structural errors.