Ooookay.
Please tell me that this is like a one-shot.

3428816 Two shot, I currently have writers block. I rather try to improve my writing via a new/bad story, rather then a good story I have. May delete this one by the end of the day, or at the very least re-write it.

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dam this story is so Awesome i love it also is there a spike X rainbow shipping in this? because if there is that would be awesome

The whole Idea is interesting. I might do something similar if I get hit with writer's block.

3430160 Really? I felt it was rushed and bad. Also yes.

3429121 don't delete it! It's a good one-shot in and of itself

if you want an idea, what about Celestia and Luna's reactions? what will they do and say? what about Rainbow? how will her training/transformation go and what will happen to her and their relationship? (like the question: does she like him for his power, or because of who he is?) and those are just some of the easy ones

PS a side question: what kind of sword is Spike's? I would love for it to be a katana

3430447 well true there some errors but other than that it's a really Awesome FanFic

is this going to be continued or is it a one shot?

3454078 There's still the good side to the story, but my current writing is abysmal.

3454528 so are you continuing this story?

Actually, i'd say this is the good part and the 2nd chapter will be the bad one.

before:
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in-between(can't find him with a cloak and sword):
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now:
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Is it bad that I don't feel bad about the guards and think they got what they deserve in this instance?

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no, i feel the same way.

Damn racist ponies