Along with a hundred or so other humans, Amaya finds herself living in Equestria. She was fresh out of college, ready to face the world as a masseuse. However, she has to ask herself, does she want to give up going home for massaging ponies?
I'll say this much, this chapter came way outa left field. Everything was all: friendship, lovey-dovey, serial killer... wait what? Ah well, guess we'll have some mystery with our shipping eh?
I like taht Discord was here but not taking up too much of the actual story by being a main character, because I know I would have wanted to have him always better off than the others
The killer sub plot would probably have felt a little less sudden if you'd mentioned newspaper articles on the serial killer a couple of chapters ago. Enjoying the story, though.
4396275 I know it probably was too late, but I wrote it in on chapter two. Starts on paragraph three, for you or anyone that wants to read that part. It did come out rather suddenly, and hadn't thought to mention the human slayer earlier.
I'll say this much, this chapter came way outa left field. Everything was all: friendship, lovey-dovey, serial killer... wait what? Ah well, guess we'll have some mystery with our shipping eh?
I like taht Discord was here but not taking up too much of the actual story by being a main character, because I know I would have wanted to have him always better off than the others
Human Slayer is the new Hash-Slinging Slasher.
The killer sub plot would probably have felt a little less sudden if you'd mentioned newspaper articles on the serial killer a couple of chapters ago. Enjoying the story, though.
4396275 I know it probably was too late, but I wrote it in on chapter two. Starts on paragraph three, for you or anyone that wants to read that part. It did come out rather suddenly, and hadn't thought to mention the human slayer earlier.
Now making proper use of "slice of life" tag
4393166 your profile pick got me laughin for quite awhile!