They say that any civilization is build on the corpses of others. Is Equestria and it's neighbors any different? Did they have to trot upon others to get where they are?
I really like the root premise of "lizardmen wake up in equestria and go WTF IS GOING ON?", and maybe even the idea of ponies discovering an extremely uncomfortable past.
A bear chasing after a skink? Bery amusing. (keh heh heh)
But...then you added the doctor, for no obvious reason.
And then you added a scientific rivalry that...apparently went way out of proportion?
Basically, I feel like you stuck waaay too many irons in the fire all at once, and the story is bogging down as a result. Maybe you can't fix this fic, but keep it in mind for future fics.
*Sigh* You got me interested with this story. An ancient civilization thought long dead waking back up and finish what they started is a premise that I could get behind.
But then you added the Doctor. Why exactly? Does he have a legitimate role in this story aside from "I like Doctor Who and I want to add him" when you could just add Daring Do or an OC archaeologist to fill in the scientist role?
You lost my interest with this story with a character I don't care about from a franchise I have no interest in. Good luck with this story when/IF you return to it.
I liked this update
doctor what are you do? Are you awakening an ancient race of warriors again?
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We will never now if Doctor has actually donne more good than bad in his adventures... Ohh and fifty years anniversary!
I really like the root premise of "lizardmen wake up in equestria and go WTF IS GOING ON?", and maybe even the idea of ponies discovering an extremely uncomfortable past.
A bear chasing after a skink? Bery amusing. (keh heh heh)
But...then you added the doctor, for no obvious reason.
And then you added a scientific rivalry that...apparently went way out of proportion?
Basically, I feel like you stuck waaay too many irons in the fire all at once, and the story is bogging down as a result. Maybe you can't fix this fic, but keep it in mind for future fics.
*Sigh* You got me interested with this story. An ancient civilization thought long dead waking back up and finish what they started is a premise that I could get behind.
But then you added the Doctor. Why exactly? Does he have a legitimate role in this story aside from "I like Doctor Who and I want to add him" when you could just add Daring Do or an OC archaeologist to fill in the scientist role?
You lost my interest with this story with a character I don't care about from a franchise I have no interest in. Good luck with this story when/IF you return to it.