Is it possible for the elements of harmony to exist in small fragments in other worlds? What if that world's elements have awakened and are calling for help? They are calling for Twilight and it has the Princesses concerned.
3389181 I was thinking about some of this recently. I've been thinking about making some changes. But I can't make a major change that changes the story completely for the chapters I've already placed. As for the characters taking Twilight in so easily, I'm trying to explain why the main characters have taken her in so well. Aside from the main characters, everyone else looks at Twilight differently. The religious group is going to be know as the Divine Judges. They are called this due to them feeling as though they have been chosen by God to deliver judgement upon people. They declare Twilight a spawn of Satan and a sign of the Apocalypse. Human nature shows that, when afraid of life or death, humans will do anything to save their own life. Later, Twilight will encounter many other challenges. But for now, the main characters accept her so easily because they've all experienced traumatic sights and challenges in their life. Loss of loved ones, traumatic sights of horror, the works... But I appreciate your input, and I will use this to make my story better. Not much I can do with the chapters already posted, but I can use it to change the future of the story. I hope you'll still follow the story and continue to input so I may make this story even better.
3389181 Oh, one more point. Celestia assumed Twilight would take the challenge once Twilight had heard it could benefit the war efforts of Equestria. Twilight has jumped into things like this before, the only difference was that they had prepared supplies for her already. A true leader shows characteristics of selflessness. Which Twilight has show with the battle with discord, saving Equestria from 100 years of darkness from the dragon, saving the crystal kingdom, even when helping Luna get used to the new ways things are done after her 1000 year banishment. I aim to add more detail to make the beginning of the story make sense. I'm using, what I call, "Star Wars Logic". Each chapter leads into explaining another chapter. It's something I'm trying.
3389181 I was thinking about some of this recently. I've been thinking about making some changes. But I can't make a major change that changes the story completely for the chapters I've already placed. As for the characters taking Twilight in so easily, I'm trying to explain why the main characters have taken her in so well. Aside from the main characters, everyone else looks at Twilight differently. The religious group is going to be know as the Divine Judges. They are called this due to them feeling as though they have been chosen by God to deliver judgement upon people. They declare Twilight a spawn of Satan and a sign of the Apocalypse. Human nature shows that, when afraid of life or death, humans will do anything to save their own life. Later, Twilight will encounter many other challenges. But for now, the main characters accept her so easily because they've all experienced traumatic sights and challenges in their life. Loss of loved ones, traumatic sights of horror, the works... But I appreciate your input, and I will use this to make my story better. Not much I can do with the chapters already posted, but I can use it to change the future of the story. I hope you'll still follow the story and continue to input so I may make this story even better.
3389181 Oh, one more point. Celestia assumed Twilight would take the challenge once Twilight had heard it could benefit the war efforts of Equestria. Twilight has jumped into things like this before, the only difference was that they had prepared supplies for her already. A true leader shows characteristics of selflessness. Which Twilight has show with the battle with discord, saving Equestria from 100 years of darkness from the dragon, saving the crystal kingdom, even when helping Luna get used to the new ways things are done after her 1000 year banishment. I aim to add more detail to make the beginning of the story make sense. I'm using, what I call, "Star Wars Logic". Each chapter leads into explaining another chapter. It's something I'm trying.
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Yup, I love cults. Thinking they can do gods work when they can't.
3396609 Yep, I call it divine justice for what happens. Feel like I might change some stuff in the past 2 chapters though to make it better
3471454 Woo! Thank you! I aim to make this story great.