Is it possible for the elements of harmony to exist in small fragments in other worlds? What if that world's elements have awakened and are calling for help? They are calling for Twilight and it has the Princesses concerned.
I approve of this story! However, if you're going to use humans, you need to add the Human tag in the edit page for this story. Other than that I have no complaints, spelling is good, grammar is good, pacing is good, and the characters are, well, in-character. Excellent work!
3363779 Thank you that makes me really happy to hear. I'll definitely fix that. I feel I might need to change it more as the story goes anyway. Thank you again
You're very welcome! I'm just giving out some advice and a short review because young, new authors like you go far with a bit of encouragement. That's what I needed to get going at least.
I approve of this story! However, if you're going to use humans, you need to add the Human tag in the edit page for this story. Other than that I have no complaints, spelling is good, grammar is good, pacing is good, and the characters are, well, in-character. Excellent work!
3363779 Thank you that makes me really happy to hear. I'll definitely fix that. I feel I might need to change it more as the story goes anyway. Thank you again
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You're very welcome! I'm just giving out some advice and a short review because young, new authors like you go far with a bit of encouragement. That's what I needed to get going at least.
3364555 It's much appreciated. Thank you for helping my story grow
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Again, you're very welcome! I wish to see you improve, because you've already got the talent to write.
Elements of Harmony. Earth and Equestria. I'm gonna read moar! Great story! :D