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Wow,
One hot scene after the next...
Brilliant storyline...
And one of the hottest smutscenes I ever read..
He Kind of reminds me a little bit of James Bond
Minus the suit and car.
Sexy Soarin with both genitalia in your story :-D
Good backstory for her + family history
A few small things like where did he store his SSD Petabyte laptop until now? And how where and what?
Convenience of storyline telling... Perhaps a little bit more explaining of the mechanics behind this...
All in all
Well done
DD
8063791 Basically think of his rucksack as a bag of holding from D&D, but without an limit on it. Kind of like Hermione's beaded bag from Deathly Hallows, she basically dumped her entire bedroom into it and still had room to spare. Also thank you for the feedback on the chapter. I don't get a lot of feedback on stories and this is the first clop chapter that has gotten feedback. I appreciate knowing that it has been well received. Oh, and Emerald will get her own chapter on occasion, including her trip home. I have a few ideas bouncing around about her mom taking the mickey out on her when she visits.
sorry but ya should have gave warning about the futa thing. it's not my thing but still like the story.
I like it I think there should be more chapters like this one