neat.

I'm sorry Malefic, but I just read like a seriously detailed badass moment where Nightmare Moon comes out, and I had imagined it in my head so amazingy detailed I got goosebumps, and I went to the comments and the first thing I see is "Neat". You have no idea how much I just giggled, thank you.

3240748 you cheeky dickwaffle!fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/006/1/f/alucard__aproves_smile__by_huskeyninja-d5qnk8i.jpg

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Hey, Dandy Dick!
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Ok let me see here...first, um...this is the first time I've ever heard anypony, especially Celestia herself, call Luna 'lulu' ...it's cute, I guess. though I prefer Luna, such a cute name all by itself.

Secondly, I heard mention that your writing style was a bit overly impressive in that you really delved into your vocabulary, in order to mimic the mindset and mental vocab of Luna, as was shown in the show, with the 'thy's and 'thee's'...

I find that...well, maybe it's the Canterlot in me, but I loved your writing style. It seemed well planned, well orchestrated, not longwinded at all. I liked it, also an okay story even if it's 'just' a clopfic, I mean yes there's a lot here especially with the backstory and the nightmare and blah blah you know your own story.

I really enjoyed it ^^ I'd keep reading but ...well I'm hard pressed, so I figured I'd just leave this comment for ya <3 might have to read some of your other works.

"People are less loyal now; they don’t know what it means to stand up for each other. The rich don’t play or deal with the poor like they used to, and the nobles won’t share a drink with non-royalty. They’ve become stingy; they seek their own happiness three times before others once. They lie, cheat and steal if it means they can get away with it. They don’t help those in trouble if it means going out of their way. And worst of all, they don’t work together like they used to. Everypony thinks they can get through life on their own without any help.”

Welcome to Capitalism, Princess Sun Butt.

"her eyes glowed with an artic blue"
aren't nmm's eyes terquis or something though?....

3248510 sigh indeed lol....

Nightmare Moon was described in awesome detail.

I'm going to give you this....that was the greatest description I've ever read of Nightmare Moon. That's saying a lot. She is my favorite pony now and she always will be with Luna being s close second. That alone makes me want to upvote, but…I just can't.
You've done something now author has ever succeeded in. You made me truly hate Luna. I'm still kinda blown away by this. Stumped I may be, but I guess the image of Luna nastyrbating to the deaths of hundreds and the ruined lives of thousands will do its I'm going to read the rest before I pass judgement but damn was that a serious negative strike. You have an excellent grasp of the words you use, the prose was wonderful, I only wish that what I had read was not the subject.