Alternative ending of crysis 3 and what might have happened if prophet got sucked in into portal. His unexpected arrival on Equestria causes war against griffons. And will Luna able to recover from her past?
The wall of text just blew my mind. I read this before you published it too. Anyway, it's fine. I have something wrong with my right eye, so I have to wear glasses now. I couldn't see some of the mistakes that well, but, my left eye's good.
If you ask some people might help you with some editing and pre-reading.
The story is... Ok. Just needs some work and better descriptions.
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I did, I don't think they are not doing their jobs.
It's if like they don't care.
I need a person who can actually pre read and edit well. Anyone?
It's if like they don't care.
I need a person who can actually pre read and edit well. Anyone?
The wall of text just blew my mind. I read this before you published it too. Anyway, it's fine. I have something wrong with my right eye, so I have to wear glasses now. I couldn't see some of the mistakes that well, but, my left eye's good.
best chapter ever
You sir are Prophet incarnate
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Thank you for fave n like!
it really means a lot to me.
hard to write this on my phone haha
3187756 I know right it's just pure badass