Let's get this shit started!!!

Damn. I wonder what level of shit storm were gonna be seeing next chapter.

I just quickly fixed most noticeable one, i am willing to fix them all later if my lazy ass allow me.

Well, it's alright, but, when different people talk, you do this;

"Redundancy?" Psycho guessed, shrugging.

"No, maybe because there's something about System X that scares them." Prophet said, looking at NAX, the back to the Dam.

Other than that, it's fine.
Your editor, Prophet.

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Sometimes, it is better to cross out unnecessary sentences. You don't need to write everything while you can just see it through their conversation. It is better to express character's emotions through conversation not through explanations, in that way, the readers tends to get more focused on the character, feeling closer to the character than writer just explaining it to them. and keeping it's simpleness is important, too.

3177164 I see where you're getting at. But, still. When someone talks, you put a space between the sentences. Other than that, I don't see any errors.

Finally Celestia gets what's coming to her.

3163094 What. The. HELL. ARE STALKNG ME? SEE YO ON EVERY FREAKNG FC

So just make her an APC with smoke launchers and with a water cannon

Just to let you know, the suits voice is internal not external, seriously guys, how do you think prophet sneaks through the ceph with that voice blazing through his goddamn suit