Alternative ending of crysis 3 and what might have happened if prophet got sucked in into portal. His unexpected arrival on Equestria causes war against griffons. And will Luna able to recover from her past?
3133956 I don't expect everyone to like my story, and I can't make everyone happy. But what I can try to do is to make people like my story as many as possible so I can have fun writing.
spelling errors everywhere god dammit how did this get approved while i have better spelling and a basic understanding of grammar but can't get approved?
Well, you did great, just a few errors. Such as Spices should be species, and berned should be bearded. Other than that, it's great.
3131534what do u think about whole luna being most POWERFUL?
I don't get how 4 people can dislike this
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I don't expect everyone to like my story, and I can't make everyone happy. But what I can try to do is to make people like my story as many as possible so I can have fun writing.
I admire that in a writer however I am biased seeing that I love your story so far.
spelling errors everywhere god dammit how did this get approved while i have better spelling and a basic understanding of grammar but can't get approved?
A few full squadrons of IL-10s butcher birds, and fridge launchers would end the war REAL quick.