Earth is threatened by a zombie outbreak and ten friends fight to survive. Unexpectedly though a portal shows up to Equestria to a land of talking ponies. Will the friends be able to keep Equestria safe or will the same fate befall upon the ponies.
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poor Scarlet
Ok wow magical humains so how op are they now? Any way preety nice chapter can't wait for the next. -tank,buster
.......Okay so what happen to the assassin? I check the other chapter and I did not see on what the heck happen to him........
I don't like this story. I think I won't read it anymore…
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You could at least say why, you know.
4456722 is drak bastrd on you
I'm with Lollolasd on this one. Although I will actually explain myself... This story has an awesome premise. The entire idea behind it is fantastic. But you rush things WAY too often. Literally you went from they hate each other to 3 chapters later they are head over heels of each other. Then there is Blake... There was absolutely zero build up between the relationship with him and the princess' but look at him he's got em both. I understood the 4 being OP but I can't think of a way for you to have given Drak powers... And I know if I keep reading this you'll try to make something up that will come up with a justification for it but I'm just not willing to put in the effort. Most of the time you write sections of the story... the feel unfinished. Like there should have been more to it... BUT I HAVE TO SAY.... The biggest thing that bothered me and I can't honestly figure out why... Is your SHEER lack of Applejack speech. You literally put no attempt into it. Applejack doesn't speak like other ponies. She has a southern drawl... She says stuff like yall and sugarcube (go watch the show again if you've forgotten). Other than all of that negativity though... If other people read my comment and like stuff like this I'm not trying to turn you away. These are just flaws I can't get past myself. Enjoy the rest of the story but I'm out.
4456722 i kinda feel like the fight scene was rushed a bit but hey its a good story and im lovin it