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Accidents can happen

The two young fillies were all ears. Scootaloo sighed and began.
"It happened 5 years ago, my dad left my mom for another mare, I had a little brother who was just 4 years old." Scootaloo let a tear fall, "His name was Rain Chaser, my mom was taking us to our new home."

(Scootaloo's flashback)
"Mommy!"
"Yes Scootaloo?"
"Where are we going?"
Scootaloo's mother smiled "Were going to a new home."
"Wheres daddy?" Scootaloo asked
Scootaloo's mom teared up "Daddy's not going to live with us anymore."
Scootaloo got mad and began to scream "No! I want daddy now! He cant go!" She jumps up and down waking up her little brother.
"Scootaloo! Sit down!"
"No! I want daddy now!"
Scootaloo's mom turns around to sit her down not watching the road. Scootaloo's mother loses control of the car and crashes in a nearby tree. Scootaloo sees her mother and cries. "Mommy?! What's wrong why aren't you moving?" She tries to get up "Ouch!" Her wings and back leg was broken. "Rain Chaser?"
"Scootaloo!"
She quickly turns around to face her little brother and doesn't like the sight at all.
Rain chaser was bleeding from his bright orange head.
"Big sis? My head hurts real bad." He begins to cry, "What's wrong with mama? Why is she sleeping?"
Scootaloo bites her lip to keep from crying. "Don't worry Rain Chaser, everything going to be okay."

"Somepony called the ponimedics and took us to a nearby hosptial. I got better in a few months but the doctor's said that I wont be able to fly well until I'm a young adult."
Scootaloo gulps and lets out a tear, "My mom died on instant and Rain Chaser he died after 3 days in the hospital."
Scootaloo cries,"I was beside him the whole time! I watched him as he suffered slowly until he died! No pony should have suffered painfully like that! Especially at his age! He was too young!"
Scootaloo bawls and cries even louder. "The last thing he said to me before he died."

Flashback
Scootaloo begins to cry as she watched her brother slowly die. Rain Chaser sees her and says "Don't cry big sis you look sad I don't like it when you look sad. I'ma see momma in a little while. I spoke to her when I dreamed, she said Don't you worry little one I love you and Scootaloo I'll see you soon. Mama still loves us she said she'll be watching over us up there." Rain Chaser points up. "Bye big sis promise me you'll be a strong filly and a good flyer like the wonderbolts."
"I promise Rain."
beep beep beep beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

Scootaloo calms down and looks at her two best friends who are crying. Apple Bloom has a box of tissues and blows her nose.
"Scootaloo?"
"Rainbow Dash?! How long have you been here?"
"Long enough." Rainbow hugs the little filly.

Author's Note:

I made myself cry while writing this...idk comment below if I should end like this or continue.

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Tachyon Xenophile

Tachyon Xenophile #1 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

Tempered Steel

Tempered Steel #2 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

Even though this idea has been done to the point of death, I still love it. It's heartbreaking to know that Scootaloo's parents died because of her (Or what she thought was her own doing.).

That's one of the worst feelings out there. Knowing that you did something that is (or what you believe is) all your fault, and you played it out just right.

Loved it!

~Literary Luna

Blue Jewel

Blue Jewel #3 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · · ·

2985562 Thanks I appreciate it

Dragon363

Dragon363 #4 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Void Mystic

Void Mystic #5 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · · ·

If this was continued, that would just be great...

rwindmtg

rwindmtg #6 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · · ·

I do not like the premise of 'a car crash' for the deaths of Scootaloo's family. This is mainly due to the fact that in the show cars are not shown or mentioned at all. I suggest a runaway wagon or an unlucky lightening bolt with the mother pulling a cart (depending on her breed).

Author's Note:
I made myself cry while writing this...idk comment below if I should end like this or continue.

Do you feel the story is finished? if so then the most we should be able to get out of you is an epilogue.

I also feel that the breaks between chapters are wrong, you could put most of the story so far, if not all of it into one chapter. But this is just my opinion.

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