oh my god THAT WAS AWESOME

"The Black Dragons Pearl" were did that remind me of

Ok, up till this chapter i felt Dark Star was justified in his hate towards his parents and Shining Armor, abit extreme in Cadence and Celestias case but still understandable.

This chapter made me lose any respect i had for him and most of the supporting cast.
I mean outright murdering his parents eveng tho they attcked first was uncaled for(especaly considering they coudn't kill him if they tried).

3135054 meh was looking for ship names and well yeah you you see what I found

3135077 I'm sorry but if I was tortured the way dark was in his youth I think no matter what powers I had I would want revenge and I would want them to the same thing they put me through. They were lucky that their deaths were quick and painless.

I thought Dark was better then his parents, apparently not. If this was the only ending to this fic I would unfav this, down vote it and forget this ever existed.
Good thing there is an ending B.

3141569 yea I am doing a different ending to that I kinda let my dark side out I guess but I do need to know which people would like to see continue

this is the best possible ending in my opinion just the image of shining armor being impaled by spikes is awesome, and i love how he turned his little brother against his parents. my personal favorite part was when he made his "mother"s insides explode

One of the best stories ever. 10/10 Thats all I have to say

Does it bother anybody else that twilight and firefly just sucker punched the leader of a nation and have no consequences?

A couple things wrong with this...
1) Now I understand why Dark Star's mad at Celestia, but, uh...WTF DID CADENCE DO TO DESERVE THAT?! She was on Dark Star's side, the whole time! The only thing she did wrong (in this story) was marry Shining Armor. Also, up until her appearance in this chapter, she was last seen exiling Shining Armor from her kingdom and undergoing some of Dark Star's training in order to become stronger.
2) Silent Night, showing up after (...what; 7, 8 chapters ago?) parting with Dark Star on good terms, and then being paid by Shining Armor to kill Dark Star's daughter and doing so all-too-gladly is yet another bolt out of the blue.

You really need to learn how to put in some foreshadowing scenes and/or stick to your own story's continuity

Revenge is FUCKING SWEET! second time ive read this story. Its been a while

Wow just wow