A direct sequel to Trixie Redemption, "From Cinders and Flame" follows our favorite showpony-turned good, Trixie, who finds the repercussions of entering a timeline she was never meant to.
Ive got one complaint... If trixie gets her body back... Won't there be two trixies?? Hence the reason she turned to dust?? Other then that so far so... GREAT!!!
hmm...what to say. First off, I am so frigging glad you either found an editor or learned from all the grammar errors in the first story, it was very painful at times. Second, it seems like when the 'butterfly' effect comes into play, nothing ever goes happy for the main character. But I am liking this so far, it kinda sucks for Trixie as she's pretty much never going to be with the the one she loves again. I imagine she is going to be a emotional roller coaster for awhile. Not sure if this is going to turn out to be a Trixie x Luna story in the end, but if so hopefully it has more time to build up then the last one as Trixie jumped from liking Twilight to Dash in about one chapter. I am looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
"You were a fool to do this, sister." Celestia huffed, narrowing her eyes as she trotted towards a guard who had been knocked unconscious from the changelings past excursion. She sighed, shaking her head lightly as she looked towards Luna and the glowing cloud that was Trixie."She was in the ether...the void! Nothing exists there. Are you so naive that you do not see the potential danger?"
So I still have reason to hate Celestia... Is there one fic where I can actually like Celestia? So far no. That's like saying I'll let sans marry Chara or Frisk. Or on a related term Flash x Twilight. Hell no!
long nights are long...
2886642 Oh you wait...things haven't even STARTED yet
Ive got one complaint... If trixie gets her body back... Won't there be two trixies?? Hence the reason she turned to dust?? Other then that so far so... GREAT!!!
3090709 Thanks. The next chapter is on hold until I'm ready with college, but thanks, it means a lot to get credit for my work
hmm...what to say. First off, I am so frigging glad you either found an editor or learned from all the grammar errors in the first story, it was very painful at times. Second, it seems like when the 'butterfly' effect comes into play, nothing ever goes happy for the main character.
But I am liking this so far, it kinda sucks for Trixie as she's pretty much never going to be with the the one she loves again. I imagine she is going to be a emotional roller coaster for awhile. Not sure if this is going to turn out to be a Trixie x Luna story in the end, but if so hopefully it has more time to build up then the last one as Trixie jumped from liking Twilight to Dash in about one chapter. I am looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
So I still have reason to hate Celestia... Is there one fic where I can actually like Celestia? So far no. That's like saying I'll let sans marry Chara or Frisk. Or on a related term Flash x Twilight. Hell no!
I hope so. Hey, can you fuse Trixie and Nightmare? Please? And make them a dragon pony with a horn.