A direct sequel to Trixie Redemption, "From Cinders and Flame" follows our favorite showpony-turned good, Trixie, who finds the repercussions of entering a timeline she was never meant to.
Okay, I'm going to do a before and after comment (Ill comment my guesses then ill read it and you'll see what I think if it after that). I'm guessing that this will be a good chapter. Maybe Trixie will get a better grasp on her situation, maybe she will learn that she will be stuck that way. I hope we see this worlds Dash and Trixie as there new born relationship grows.
But I'm curious on the fact that if Trixie gets turned back into pony form wont that cause the same problem that turned her to dust in the first place? Think about it, if she gets turned into a pony again there will be 2 Trixie in this universe causing it to go all wonky and turn her back to dust? Its been a while sense Ive read the first story so I hope I remember it correctly. Anyway I for see this being a future problem that will probably be dealt with in a future chapter.
Anyway back on topic. I love this series and I can't wait to read this chapter. Its been a long wait but I think its worth it.
Okay at the beginning I though that the short chapter length was going to be a problem. Oh boy I was wrong! You managed to condenses the same amount of information in 1,800 that I've seen people have trouble doing in 5,000! You also managed to avoid an information dump and make it an enjoyable read, ingenious writing!
As far as my predictions went give me credit I got close! Though I was completely off with some of my predictions. I was right about my theory that Trixie got a better grasp on her situation. Im hoping that we will see more problems with two Trixie's being in this demention. I hope that in later chapters you get into more detail about Trixie and Dashes relationship.
Im curiose to see if my second theory still stands. I mean it still can fit. I still think that two Trixies will be a problem in the future. Im not sure to be honest.
So overall this chapter surpassed my greatest expectations! I hope that the future chapters will be updated more regularly. At first I thought this story would just be a stretched ripoff of the first story, I only thought this because I didn't see how you would continue it. But you managed to not only make a GREAT continuation but a great story plot! You haven't ceased to amaze me yet and I look forward to future chapters!
Okay, I'm going to do a before and after comment (Ill comment my guesses then ill read it and you'll see what I think if it after that). I'm guessing that this will be a good chapter. Maybe Trixie will get a better grasp on her situation, maybe she will learn that she will be stuck that way. I hope we see this worlds Dash and Trixie as there new born relationship grows.
But I'm curious on the fact that if Trixie gets turned back into pony form wont that cause the same problem that turned her to dust in the first place? Think about it, if she gets turned into a pony again there will be 2 Trixie in this universe causing it to go all wonky and turn her back to dust? Its been a while sense Ive read the first story so I hope I remember it correctly. Anyway I for see this being a future problem that will probably be dealt with in a future chapter.
Anyway back on topic. I love this series and I can't wait to read this chapter. Its been a long wait but I think its worth it.
~Michael A.
Okay at the beginning I though that the short chapter length was going to be a problem. Oh boy I was wrong! You managed to condenses the same amount of information in 1,800 that I've seen people have trouble doing in 5,000! You also managed to avoid an information dump and make it an enjoyable read, ingenious writing!
As far as my predictions went give me credit I got close! Though I was completely off with some of my predictions. I was right about my theory that Trixie got a better grasp on her situation. Im hoping that we will see more problems with two Trixie's being in this demention. I hope that in later chapters you get into more detail about Trixie and Dashes relationship.
Im curiose to see if my second theory still stands. I mean it still can fit. I still think that two Trixies will be a problem in the future. Im not sure to be honest.
So overall this chapter surpassed my greatest expectations! I hope that the future chapters will be updated more regularly. At first I thought this story would just be a stretched ripoff of the first story, I only thought this because I didn't see how you would continue it. But you managed to not only make a GREAT continuation but a great story plot! You haven't ceased to amaze me yet and I look forward to future chapters!
~Michael A.
3203394 I hope to do so, as well...I'm not too enticed by the idea of writing in between my college...I'll try, though,
3203957 YAY!