Another world

by Rainbowdawww

Shy beginnings

I was alone. Not in any physical sense the plane I was on was filled to the brim but in an emotional sense I might as well be the only man on the earth.
"sir would you like anything to drink?"
I didn't notice anything going on around me I was so deep in thought so the light talk of the flight attendant was all but lost to me
" sir."
my thoughts was interrupted by the light taping of the flight attendants tanned hand on my lightly muscled shoulder. I looked over to see an impatient young lady probably in her early twenties lightly taping her foot on the small walkway of the airplane behind the drink cart
" sir would you like anything to drink?" she asked again this time with a little agitation
I replied with polite no and she went about her rounds with the rest of the plane completely unaware of the events unfolding in the clouds. But then again so was everyone else including me it was just supposed to just a normal overseas flight as anyone would assume but maybe it wasn't. Maybe it was a plan, set in motion the faithful I watched the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic. Witch was arguably one of the best days of my 16 year old life well let's get back on topic.

Deep in the clouds above flight 6439 there was a storm brewing preparing to strike down with it's full force
CRACK
it was happening. I still see the day playing over and over again. The plane cracked in half plummeting towards the ocean. It felt like hours. Plummeting from cursing altitude falling helplessly. The only thing I could be comforted by was the screams and the final prayers of the others plummeting to their doom reminding me cruelly that I was still alive until the final bone shattering smash into the cold waters of the Atlantic ocean. The sound of the screaming was silenced and the only clue I had about being alive was the razor like cold. My most primal instincts kicked in telling my swim up you idiot or you'll die. Having no other choices I swam towards what I thought was up. The current was like a bull repetitively charging me making me swim with a stronger force then ever before then it all went dark

i awoke on a strange rocky Island with cuts all over my body and a sharp pain in my leg and a something pushing into my lung whenever breathed. I saw a faint light in a nearby cave and having no other rational option I crawled towards it the rocks and sand rubbing my chest through my now ripped shirt. The jolts of pain shooting through my body would be unbearable if it wasn't for the extreme amount of adrenaline but I had to keep on crawling because it was the only chance I had left so I kept on going until I made it to the source of the light. A large yellow crystal, I grabed it grasping it it with the full force my crippled body could muster. I started feeling a something pushing me in all directions and the force was too Mitch and I succumbed to the blackness forcing it's way into my vision

I awoke this time in another strange place. But this one was strangely familiar. I tried to get up but a sharp jolt of pain shot through my body causing me to let out a light scream I lied back down abandoning my futile attempts at trying to get up when I heard a small squeak and the small clacking of hoofs. Then it hit me. Hoofs? But I'm in a house how is that possible but my thoughts were interrupted by a small yellow horse saying
"umm... hi... are you alright?
I replied with I quick nod of my head. Then it hit me like a bullet to the brain. Horses don't speak English
"I umm I... I'm Fluttershy"
Fluttershy. That sounded familiar and I realized. I'm in equstria! this would have been the greatest moment of my life if it wasn't for the extreme amounts of pain i was in .
"Hi Fluttershy. my name is David. but you can call me Dave."
the last thing i heard was what must have been a squee of joy before the yellow Pegasus bolted out of the room soon after she left a small bunny walked up to me and stared at me. I could almost see some disappointment.
soon after my little stare down with angel bunny Fluttershy came back this time with a light purple unicorn that looks like it hasn't been out side if a few days. it must of been twilight.
"WOW! Your still alive! With the injures you had the amount of blood you were loosing i was sure you were a goner. but since your awake lets get you fixed up!"
as she finished what she was saying a light glow enveloped my body and i felt a tingling sensation first in my legs but then it started to spread. My cuts were sealing and my bones resetting.
"wow that was useful!" i said completely amazed at what just happened
"Goddesses! you speak pony?!?!" twilight said flabbergasted
" Yup!" i said enthusiastically" lots of people on my home planet do. except we call it English."
"interesting. SPIKE.... SPIKE GET OVER HERE." the room went silent and spike was nowhere to be found.
"UHHHGG. i must have forgotten him at home. i was just so exited! a real live human. On one of my best friends couch" she said as she started running off.
"Oh! I almost forgot. You should come with me. Maybe I could show you around" she said peeking her head around the door
i was so amazed by just being here I had to follow her. Maybe this is all a dream. well... Dream or reality i,m gonna live the hell out of it

Comments

[Xaldon Ajide]

interesting i'm gonna see where this goes

[MagneticMind]

I think its a decent start for and HiE. Other then a few typos, I don't see anything wrong with the wording. Seems a little fast paced though and there isn't enough detail to really interest me in tracking it. Add more to it. I'll keep an eye out though.

[Kintra]

Yea, I agree with mind, not a bad start, few typos here and there, "Witch was arguably" witch should be which and other small mistakes. Aside from that and the strange acceptance the ponies have of him... Not bad.

[Rainbowdawww]

Thanks for the feedback !!! its really appreciated.