Winter Nights
written by Haunted Toaster
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Intresting so far, really needs an editor though...
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Could you be more specific about the mistakes I do? I would like to know what I need to work on.
Wow. Did you just trash the entire story and restarted?
6813505 I'd be happy to send you a revised version of the chapter through Email, your mistakes mostly consist of wrong tenses and wrong word usages, also you tend to repeat a one word too many times in a short span of words.
Like I said, you give me your email and I'll send you the revised version.