Winter Nights
written by Haunted Toaster
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6813505 sentence structure is shaky, you're missing capitalizations everywhere, and the puncuation is often wrong.
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I'm working on the first and the last one but... capitalizations? Really? I don't see any errors...
Sorry for bothering you, but English is my 2nd language and I want to know what I need to improve.
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Yup, I wanted to do it for some time now.
The first chapters will be changed in some ways, there will be a lot more details and some events will be added, but old readers don't need to read them if they don't want to and can just start from chapter 4.
Is that a problem or something?