I needs moar.

That pony had been Soarin’, who had traveled all the way from Canterlot, just for the chance to eat one of the Apple Family’s prized confections

I had to laugh at that bit. I've just read a story where Soarin isn't obsessed with pies, even complaining everypony thinks that a little!!

Hmm, what Rarity Should've done is helped Fluttershy put the rest of her outfit on, sneaking in and out whilst Soarin was eating.

Da'wwww! Fluttershy is the cutest thing ever! I don't know if I can even clop to this once it gets underway... Way to cute!