4884498 I really am trying to do just that, make the chaps longer, but sometimes it just has to end in such a way to leave a cliff hanger or it's just the perfect moment. I can say that the next chap and after WILL GUARAN-FUCKING-TIED be longer. In fact, I'm at this very moment trying to make the slaughter as long as possible before having Onyx wake up and explain himself, which will be in the same chapter. I'm hoping to make it 5k or longer, so expect some readage.
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Ah, it's been so long since I wrote that that I forgot. Thank you.
well well.... shit just got real.
love the story. please keep it up.
one issue i do have though. can you make the chapters a bit longer?
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I really am trying to do just that, make the chaps longer, but sometimes it just has to end in such a way to leave a cliff hanger or it's just the perfect moment. I can say that the next chap and after WILL GUARAN-FUCKING-TIED be longer. In fact, I'm at this very moment trying to make the slaughter as long as possible before having Onyx wake up and explain himself, which will be in the same chapter. I'm hoping to make it 5k or longer, so expect some readage.
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Rockon. I will be truthful if i were to get sucked in to equestria i wouldnt mind this way of doing it.
Please post the next chapter soon.