A sixteen year old kid is hunted and shot, left for dead in a forest next to a small town, when suddenly six young, beautiful girls appear from nowhere and helps him. Now he awakes in a strange land, surrounded by anthropomorphized ponies. OC HiE.
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2832604 Wasn't thinking of Far Cry... DAMN I missed a good opportunity!
2833419 It was just a warning for those who weren't expecting it.
Most interesting chapter yet.Hoping for more soon.
2833814 This is where the action is going to be coming in.
Well, that training was fast ain't it?
Nooo, my clop! Fuck you Daniel!
2834347 Yeah, the gore wasn't really heavy, but some might disagree. Safety precautions against the butthurt bitches that complain about every little damn thing. Anyway, I didn't want to spend five chapters writing out how they trained, since it was basically with practice weapons. I explained how he got Ragnarok, and all that bullshit. Anyway, I wanted to make Daniel hard to get and so, viola! He knocks himself out and summons the mistwalker. Either next chapter or after that, there will be clop! {SPOILER ALERT} It's a gangbang, against Daniel.
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Maybe you can have him do it with the greatsword later in this story or somehow added an extra version to the last chapter then. The only reason I was thinking about it because I just finished watching a walkthrough of it some days ago. I would have used the last knife fight but, you know, spoilage and the other reason is that Jason's too angry in that one.
Once again things, went kind of fast when it became his birthday again and strangely heartless of Twilight to ask about humans right after he got hurt, although I'm glad he called her out on it. Still it's really weird about that mist thing showing up JUST NOW and calling him weak I thought it took over Fluttershy instead, looks like I was wrong. Can we get an explanation on what that thing is in the next chapter though?
I was except nose bleed from Daniel, when he saw those 6 mane.
2835491 Read the last chapter again.
It went into Daniel's body, and was summoned when he knocked himself unconscious. Anyway, I might do extra chapters on his training or how he got the greatsword, but I was feeling lazy and wanted to get three chapters out in one day.
2836105 Daniel fell down the stairs, but he isn't the perverted bastard that most HiEs have in where seeing one girl they get a nose bleed that sends them to the moon. Now becoming eighteen though... He will certainly get some very soon, and it'll be oh so sweet.
2851907 They probably listened to three, four minutes of beethoven. I just put the full video in because I was being lazy.
good story so far.
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...No... Why are you reading my mind right now? I didn't give any hints in my comments on what I was doing, yet you guessed...
knocking yourself out... genius... just genius...
Im not sure about him being so lenient with the sevensome since hes in love with just fluttershy
NOOOOOO clopfics in a chapter are bad
who you calling perv! no just kidding. XD
ha! he knocked himself unconscious! take that you horny ponies!
but this poor guy can not live a quiet life with his loving Fluttershy without risking their lives every time
Dear god, I know I'm still so far behind, and this is such a late comment.
But nnggff Living After Midnight isn't a Disturbed song, it's a Judas Priest song.
Disturbed just covered it.
I know it's really late and all that, and I don't know if you already knew that, but it's just a thing I do.
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Well that was jarring,
One year later, Fully trained,
no build up as to why the rest of the six are interested in him, and why he seems not interested in them.
apparently no repercussions to him or the mercenary unicorns who kidnapped him, by being magically whisked away
not even a decent fight scene with the erstwhile black knight O.o
That stuff's not just filler, there's important plot points that seem to have been just glazed over.
I can understand taking a few levels in badass, but this kinda throws me off the story.
Wtf just happened.
I think their mistake was showing off to him BEFORE giving him the cider.
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LOL. Sexy Main 6? wanting to see if its a dream? *do this, go to dream realm and see this*
The manesix want to bang your brains out and he knocks himself out........
What a dumbass