Octavia always obeys the rules. Octavia always minds herself and studies hard for school. Octavia always helps when her friend vomits or drools. Octavia could always tell the truth, but Octavia is no fool.
Eeh, platonic or not, the entire 'Vinyl and Octavia are related, best friends, rivals or banging' thing has kinda been done to death. It's just kinda a minor turn-off when I see it in stories, I do actually like this however.
I don't mind it if it's done right, but it's been done too much to really be something I'd click on just because of that. Now, if we got something like, Tavi+Twilight ship, that would be interesting to check out.
Outside of that, however. This looks great.
What's your angle here, Herculean? Where are you planning on taking us?
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2803269 I'm sorry I ever doubted you.
Also: Dis gon b gud.
Thank you for reminding me I have to catch up on the other story.
I laughed to hard at this line!!!
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So far, it looks to be platonic love. There is a Romance tag, of course, so maybe that'll change.
Great job so far! Awesome cliffhanger to end on as well...can't wait to see what happens next.
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Eeh, platonic or not, the entire 'Vinyl and Octavia are related, best friends, rivals or banging' thing has kinda been done to death. It's just kinda a minor turn-off when I see it in stories, I do actually like this however.
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Fair enough. It's definitely been done a lot. I don't mind it, as long as it's done right.
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I don't mind it if it's done right, but it's been done too much to really be something I'd click on just because of that. Now, if we got something like, Tavi+Twilight ship, that would be interesting to check out.
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Ooh, never seen that one before! Agreed, that would be interesting.