After years of avoiding Hearts and Hooves Day, a human decides to give in and find his special somepony.
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I like the story, but I think you might benefit from a proofreader. There were a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes as I read through the story, and during the E.V.A.N. chapters, it felt a little like the characters were just reading an essay rather than actually speaking. I apologise if my comment upsets you or anything, but it just feels like your story has a potential it's just waiting to reach, and I think a proofreader might help in that regard.
5148153 Nah, I'm not mad at your comment. I know a lot of fimfiction writers have proofreaders but I'm not sure how it works. I write my stories on my old laptop that has officepro and if it detects spelling errors, it lets me know. I don't have Microsoft word that can also detect more errors on my old on nor my new one (I use Wordpad on my new laptop if I'm traveling and need to update my fics). so if there's any proofreaders out there that will help me out, I appreciate it. thanks.
5148828 Well, you could always try Google Drive. I use that for my own stuff, whether it's stories, info I need to save regarding RPs I do with my friends, or gaming stuff. As for finding a proofreader, there's a few groups you can look up. I can find a few and link you to them if you want.
5148851 sure. send me the links through PM
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fuck you.