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Today's Story: Distorted Fate, by Silvak

Completion Rate: Chapter 51 of 51

There seems to be a certain lack of drama both in this story and the main character that stars in it.

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Another year another 9/11 shit post. See you all next year.

Critique, in my mind, is an assessment, an evaluation. It identifies the ideas the writer was attempting to get across, the sensations, the feelings, and judges how well those were communicated. It identifies the good versus the bad and pits these against each other, highlighting by contrast where the writer should focus their efforts to produce future, stronger works. At least, this is what I imagine critique to be.

After some time browsing, I think I'm in the minority.

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