TThe Crescent Pact

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Adventure
• Drama

The Crescent Pact remained in the shadows for 200 years, preparing to usurp Celestia. Aphelion, a member of the Pact, begins to learn the truth about its real goals.

• Sex
• Narcotics
• Violence
• Profanity
• Alt. Universe
• Celestia
• Luna
• OC

Chromentazol · 107k words  ·  27  2 · 542 views

Review: The Crescent Pact

Tags: Sex, Narcotics, Violence, Profanity, Romance, Adventure, Drama

Summary: A story theory of what happened in the past before G4 started.

Review: OC story theory I do love these a lot.  There is a lot of good idea for this… Lots of care and love for this fiction highly recommend it. But saying that you were sick at one point… Hope you fixed all of that though… since this is a review….   Grammar is alright :P…   I do like the characters I think it’s well done as well… Although it’s incomplete there is more stuff…. However, I have to say at least a 6/10 so far… The ending isn’t there yet and that can be a big thing to the story…. Forgive me.

Thank you for your review! And I understand about the ending (or lack thereof), it is still an ongoing process/will be for a while