TImprobable

• MLP: FiM
• Romance

As you struggle to come to terms with the fact that your best friend, Twilight Sparkle, has developed feelings for you, a stranger from a forgotten past suddenly arrives and turns your life upside-down.

• Second Person
• Human
• Twilight
• OC
• Cadance
• Anon

Erynaster · 15k words  ·  62  4 · 1.1k views

Review: Improbable 

Tags: Romance, Second Person, Human

Summary: An Anon story about you…  making friendship in equestria.

Review: Not bad although it’s still incomplete.  So… I hear by giving this already a 6/10.

The grammar is alright.  The idea is pretty well done. The characters are pretty good, especially Twilight.  Good on emotion and such.

Thanks for the review! :>