ENeocros: The Water Dragon

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Slice of Life

When Rainbow Dash tries to take a nap, a water dragon calls out to her.

• Rainbow Dash
• OC
• Self Insert

Samuel-Neocros · 14k words  ·  19  3 · 1.1k views

Review; Neocros: The Water Dragon

Tags: Romance, Slice of Life

Summary: Cute ships

Review: So far, it’s good although there is one problem… if you use the white theme where the white background the blue won't show that much…  now if you have a dark theme on it’s pretty easy to see it.  I mean why do people love white so much that dark theme… is out of the question and is not to be mentioned otherwise but this is it… and it’s still good fiction if you like the color added to the fiction story for every dialog.  

It’s still incomplete however, this is still true… I still like it how it is and still hope there will be more chapters yet to be there. I give this fiction a 6/10 only because we haven't read the true ending for the fiction yet. It seems the author's note is also something I wasn't looking forward to reading after each chapter. Not only that but changing the fiction from its original idea could cost the actual ending of the original author. (users changing the fiction to the direction of their wants and needs.)