TThe Heroes of Bite Apple

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Comedy
• Sci-Fi

You're a pegasus stallion, who is now living in the Ashen Wasteland with a monster mare, Runt. After stumbling into the town of Bite Apple, Runt's monstrous identity is exposed and now the two of you must work with the townsfolk from raiders or else.

• Violence
• Second Person
• Alt. Universe
• Apple Bloom
• OC

Robipony · 15k words  ·  52  3 · 527 views

Review: The Hero of Bite Apple

Tags: Violence, adventure, comedy, sci-fi, second person, Alternate Universe

Summary: Sounds like a mutant zombie apocalypse like fallout.

 Review: After I read this it’s above average I have to say.  All the characters had a lot of dialogue.  Which is good in some ways… However, how I feel from this fiction is 90% satisfying.  There may be one thing I didn’t like in this fiction and it was high caps… which means they are shouting…  High caps sentences do give me a headache from time to time.  The story is still great though I’m 100% satisfied with that.  At least it was in the alternate universe.

In my conclusion I can only give this a 9/10.  A really good above average.