A band of mercenaries, composed of griffons and bat ponies and led by a one winged griffon are on a quest for cold hard cash, killing whatever gets in their way.
Review: I have to say this is well done. The fiction looks neat and professional. Grammar checks are all good. This is really good. I hope that this author completes this in the future. I might give this fiction at least a 9/10.
There might be some stuff that we haven’t read yet which is future chapters… also it’s incomplete. But the score might be high if it’s complete but could also have a bad ending…. Meh…
I give this at least an 8/10… just in case we have a bad ending for the story. Like I say to all people who haven’t completed it yet I can only put points when it’s beginning to end. Unless there is a sequel.
Also the title needs to change instead of high capping it.
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Adventure
A band of mercenaries, composed of griffons and bat ponies and led by a one winged griffon are on a quest for cold hard cash, killing whatever gets in their way.Review: THE SAVAGE SWORD
Tags: Gore, Violence, Death, Profanity, Dark, Adventure
Summary: Action adventure mature story
Review: I have to say this is well done. The fiction looks neat and professional. Grammar checks are all good. This is really good. I hope that this author completes this in the future. I might give this fiction at least a 9/10.
There might be some stuff that we haven’t read yet which is future chapters… also it’s incomplete. But the score might be high if it’s complete but could also have a bad ending…. Meh…
I give this at least an 8/10… just in case we have a bad ending for the story. Like I say to all people who haven’t completed it yet I can only put points when it’s beginning to end. Unless there is a sequel.
Also the title needs to change instead of high capping it.