TTHE SAVAGE SWORD

• MLP: FiM
• Dark
• Adventure

A band of mercenaries, composed of griffons and bat ponies and led by a one winged griffon are on a quest for cold hard cash, killing whatever gets in their way.

• Gore
• Violence
• Death
• Profanity
• Alt. Universe
• OC
• Bat Pony
• Griffons

anarchywolf18 · 13k words  ·  20  3 · 776 views

Review: THE SAVAGE SWORD

Tags:  Gore, Violence, Death, Profanity, Dark, Adventure

Summary:  Action adventure mature story

Review:   I have to say this is well done.  The fiction looks neat and professional.  Grammar checks are all good. This is really good. I hope that this author completes this in the future.   I might give this fiction at least a 9/10.

There might be some stuff that we haven’t read yet which is future chapters… also it’s incomplete. But the score might be high if it’s complete but could also have a bad ending…. Meh…

I give this at least an 8/10…  just in case we have a bad ending for the story. Like I say to all people who haven’t completed it yet I can only put points when it’s beginning to end.  Unless there is a sequel.

Also the title needs to change instead of high capping it.