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- MLP: FiM
- Romance
- Comedy
Derpy tries to find the courage to finally ask out the one mare she's always admired for Hearth’s Warming Eve. It goes as well as expected.Review: Pinked Eye
Tags: [Romance], [Comedy]
Summary: Pinkie Pie and Derpy the cool ponies of popular between one of the main six and a background pony that we know in love Derpy. Derpy making a delivery. :3 OMG cute!!!!
Critic: There is nothing for me to say in this moment where all characters were great at their roles. All grammar is at it’s finest, sharp and better than you can ever imagine. This is a fiction you should read and OMG… It is rated E for everyone. I have a feeling like anyone who reads this review truly knows what if I don’t do a lot of critics about the story it is for a good reason.
Spot on 10/10 masterpiece.