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I would need the password to read it

Can anyone help me by proofreading this fanfiction i made and help me with spelling and grimmer errors i made in it.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/402977/fallout-eqeustria-return-of-the-lost-souls-my-vorsion

i have a story that needs prereading

can i ask what i can do to make my story better?
if i can, here's the link,
link!
if i can't, disregard the last sentence.

Thanks for inviting me.