Star Trek: Into Equestria Part 1 of 4: The Arrival

EStar Trek: Into Equestria: Part 2 of 4: Saving Grace
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Doctor McCoy finally finds out some rules are meant to be broken to save your friends.
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Celestia
Mayor Mare
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admiralthunderstorm · 2.6k words · 8 4 · 603 views

Star Trek: Into Equestria Part 1 of 4: The Arrival

Part 1- The first story of how captain Kirk and Celestia got to know each other. Something happens that almost causes the downfall of the Federation.

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First Contact · 2nd Apr 2015 · 1,260 words
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Canterlot · 2nd Apr 2015 · 663 words
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Tipping Point · 20th Mar 2017 · 1,135 words
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Thunderbolt Sentinel

Thunderbolt Sentinel #1 · Apr 6th, 2015 · 1 · 1 · Canterlot ·

Not how I expected Luna or Celestia to act, but I'll keep watching for more.

Admiral Q Ponyform

Admiral Q Ponyform #2 · Apr 6th, 2015 · 4 · 8 · Canterlot ·

insantly getting a thumbs down for using the reboot crap

Dragonborne Fox

Dragonborne Fox #3 · Apr 7th, 2015 · 3 · · Canterlot ·

Your synopsis reveals so much with so little. I'd recommend help via editors, prereaders, and G-docs. Otherwise, I will sadly not read this story, because the synopsis lets me know exactly what's gonna happen in part two.

Commissar Rarity

Commissar Rarity #4 · Apr 7th, 2015 · · · Canterlot ·

Into Darkness is an insult to Star Trek. What's wrong with the real crew?

Flyerton

Flyerton #5 · Apr 7th, 2015 · · · Canterlot ·

You've either planned this ahead SO FAR that you've made part two, or part one's gonna last a few chapters.

Either doesn't sit well with me. Besides. I know jack shit besides Kirk meets Celestia/ then part two where they kicked Nightmare Moon's ass... Wait, did you just say defeat Nightmare Moon.

*Has flashbacks of HiE fics*

Schiesse, I have a goddamn bad feeling about this. I'll do this when it's not like, Midnight.

Flyerton

Flyerton #6 · Apr 8th, 2015 · · · Canterlot ·

I've finished reading this, and by god this is bad.

Everyone is OOC, Aj can kick Kirk in the balls, with no consequences. Sorry this is horribly bad.

metroid_freak

metroid_freak #7 · Apr 9th, 2015 · 1 · · First Contact ·

As someone writing a serious, dedicated Trek/Pony fic, this doesn't sit well with me. There is a general lack of effort here; seriously, learn some grammar and story-writing rules before you continue. Your grammar needs serious work and your pacing needs to drop out of warp.

Also, the reboot Enterprise is larger than the original but it does not eat up 4 miles of land. Even landing it wouldn't hurt nearly that much space.

metroid_freak

metroid_freak #8 · Apr 9th, 2015 · 1 · · Canterlot ·

"Nice speech, dickhead now get your fucked up hot rod tin can off our fucking planet." She said.

That's possible the most terribly-written response for Luna I've ever seen anyone write. Seriously, the OOC is so thick in this story, you could cut it with a bat'leth.

NightHawk114