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A slice of discorded life? Let's see.

From Your Most Grateful Admirer
Slice of Life
3,750 words
Grammar: 10/10 -- No errors detected
Characterization: 9/10 -- Everyone felt basically in character and playing their part well
Use of show canon: 9/10 -- A classic bit of fanon rears its head, but it's a tiny blemish on a piece that feels pretty rooted.
Plot consistency: 10/10 Discord talks, fun is had!
Coherence: 10/10 Should Discord plots be coherent? This one is.
Total: 48/50, 96%, Approved with pleasure. Give it a read if you haven't already.

5702450 Thank you kindly for the positive review. I worked hard on this little piece.

5702505 Thank you for writing this delightful tale.

5702526 There's only one chapter, (I really REALLY need to get back to it) but I hope you'll give the sequel Forced Existential Alteration a look. More Discord goodness.

5702536 Is that on the submissions?

5702562 No. I was just suggesting it if it interested you outside of admin duties.

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