Rape Is Bad And You Should Feel Bad
Romance/Tragedy/Dark/Comedy/Human
4,974 words
Grammar: 10/10
Characterization: 5/10
Luna's behavior is strange and inconsistent.
Use of show canon: 3/10
It doesn't come up, even when it should.
Plot consistency: 10/10
The plot is remarkably simple and consistent for something that initially claims to be a dream.
Use of OCs: 2/10
Honestly, the protagonist is lacking in any detail. He also makes some sudden shifts in behavior that aren't really explained.
Coherence: 7/10
It's reasonably coherent.
Extra things depending on genre: 3/10
This is not even a black comedy. It doesn't even make an attempt to be funny. It's slightly ironic, but that's it. It isn't a romance and it isn't really a tragedy either. Just dark.
Controversy points:
-((2(3)^2*2)=-72
Score: -32/70
This failed, and failed miserably.

Wow. Something to rival human vs pony war for rejection status. Good work!

3643555 Just an idea, but do you think we could make 0 the minimum score? Negatives just seem cruel to me...

3643580 No reason why not. Minimizes the slap to the face. We don't wanna seem cruel or people might start avoiding submissions..

The Tags on this Fic make no sense, Romance? COMEDY? WTF!

3643580 Yeah. We should do that.

3643555 Lol this is ridiculous -32/70 = wtf

3643555
>Going into minus numbers

3643555

I feel like the reviews for rejected have been a bit inconsistent.

Honestly, the protagonist is lacking in any detail. He also makes some sudden shifts in behavior that aren't really explained.

It's reasonably coherent.

Ahem.