i want to try and write a sad story where sweetie deals with the deepest sadness ever but can only come up with diamond getting so far under her skin she thinks/ believes she's absolutely worthless can any pony come up with another idea?

Something like For Whom the Sweetie Belle Toils, only Sweetie doesn't end up having Luna guide her out of her mistake, and Rarity is upset with her for a while until they figure out how to repair their relationship on their own.

6966956 Well, if you decide to go with Diamond Tiara scenario, you can always reread the scene from my novel.

TSweetie Belle Gains a Soul

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama
• Slice of Life

In her darkest hour, Sweetie Belle finds salvation, but it comes with a terrible curse.

• Twilight
• Rarity
• Sweetie Belle
• CMCs

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