This thread is for those with sad story's and are looking for feedback. Please only post to this thread if your story has the sad tag. If your story does not I will take down your post.

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*note* to those who have already set up feedback request threads, please delete your original thread before posting here.

Birthday Wishes
Sad, Slice of Life
This is a story about Scootaloo and her parents that takes place about a month before the events of the show. If you're a Scootaloo fan, you might enjoy this one.

866364 that's fine but please try to follow the format

Eternally Yours
[Sad] [Romance]
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/135885/eternally-yours
Applejack is dying, and has a deathbed conversation with Twilight Sparkle.

I haven't submitted this yet, and I'm looking for impressions. If I take any of your suggestions, I'd be happy to give you a pre-reader credit in the description, too.

The Apple on His Flank
[Sad] [Slice of Life]
After Apple Bloom gets into a fight at school and an argument at home, Big Macintosh decides it's time he told her how he got his cutie mark.

Looking for feedback on pacing, portrayal of emotions, overall story/storytelling, etc.