His name is Free, and he was a slave. But when he found his opening and escaped his owners, he finds that the wasteland holds its own horrors. Will he remain uncorrupted? Or will the wasteland wittle away all that he holds dear until he breaks?
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What's this?! Three new chapters? Have a song as reward!
(turn on the subtitles to fully enjoy it )
"Why do you need so many desk fans and typewriters?!"
"I need screws!"
"And what about all this duct tape?"
"You always need adesive for crafting!"
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I'm not sure what I just watched but it was funny! Thank you!
Jerry's whole life have been about taking everything that isn't nailed down and then getting a crowbar to take those too.
Unedited? Now that just means that I need to pick some more nits!
Only one segment of the chapter in, and I already know where we are going, and what Vault there inspired this chapter. Honestly does it make a lot of sense, you need a fuckton of room to grow all of your food when you are a herbivore, so trying to experiment with new plants could be useful, beside is it part of the ponies nature to play with nature like that, the biggest reason the ponies fear the Everfree is that it is a "free" forrest. With that said would I not call a quickly growing plant a big menace towards herbivores, heck with how little rain and thick clouds the Wasteland have would mutated food be a boon and not a bane.
So two stables down, many more to go. As mentioned above are there many fun things one could do with such a place, even more so when it is placed under a fabric mill, so I sure hope that we will be back here, and that all of this stuff won't be left behind. A lot of stories have gotten the weird habit of stuffing their plot with a lot of interresting places, just to never return to them or have them impact the overall story. I know that is how games does it, but games are also very limited by how much programming you need to do to do changes, and who can't say that they love it when a choice that they did in the past had an influence on the plot. What I am saying is don't waste all of your fungi, go play with your food and come up with some good ideas!
Fun fungus fact!
Fungi are neither plants nor animal, but are in a special group between the two since they both breathe and produce oxygen. Ain't nature fascinating!
Nitty nitpicks:
"It looks… empty. " should be in past tense
", a thick sticky goop leaking from the ends and dripping the foul smelling sludge on top of me. " I can't remember any sludge being mentioned at an earlier point, so you can't use "the" here.
"Once the opening was wide enough for me to fit through" Linebreak mistake
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Thanks Doomande. I touched those up