His name is Free, and he was a slave. But when he found his opening and escaped his owners, he finds that the wasteland holds its own horrors. Will he remain uncorrupted? Or will the wasteland wittle away all that he holds dear until he breaks?
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Nice chapter! New friends and more character development... always a good thing.
AND a cameo by somepony I may know That was so awesome!
Keep up the great work!
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Glad you enjoyed it :D
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*totally innocent* I don't know what you're referring to.
"Jerry yawned and leaned her head against my shoulder while I stared at the pip-buck" Capital letters, properly happens multiple times, but are only gonna mention it once.
"e were making good progress based upon our distance from the stable." Capital letter as well, and the same
"She made a half mumbled argument even as her eyes drifted closed." close
"listening but not asking any questions of my own.." Double period
"I must’ve been staring...blatantly" You forgot a space after your ellipse
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You're catching lots of things I miss. Double periods and missing spaces usually stand out to me, but not with these. I appreciate the extra eye to keep things looking nice.