Made a small song for ambience.

So I made a couple of songs a while ago before I returned to write for this site, and I was thinking of embedding some for use on Knight of Order or some other adventure story.

It's just another one of my cheap tricks to color my story past my writing-prowess, since I'm trying to increase reader interaction, but still! I think it'd be interesting trying to paint a picture with words what you feel for a song/ambient sound and vise-versa as the song helps readers feel-out the scenario better.

Here's one of them:

Any thoughts?

Comments

[horsepoweryt]

Makes me feel like I'm in an rpg

[Darkevony]

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That's honestly the kind of effect I was gunning for! Its especially fit for something I'll write for Knight of Order. Inserting it into the story is probably impossible, but a boy can dream. I just want to craft experiences for people.

I also have this one that's supposed to follow it up as they're themed with similar instruments. You can pretty much imagine what will happen in the story just from hearing that, no?