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Jul
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2022

MLP shorts - episode 18 - On Your Cutie Marks (my commentary) · 1:26pm Jul 14th, 2022

My previous commentaries were riddled with my subjective views. So, for this one, I shall only objectivelly describe what I see without commenting and letting my subjectivity getting the better of me. So, here's the objective summary of the above video:

Everypony loves pegasi balls play. Mostly because they can observe them from below.
Sunny observes and gets too distracted to coordinate.
Earth ponies jizz. Then Unicorns jizz.
Pegassi bukake. Nopony is safe. Even royalty gets jizzed upon.
Sunny apologizes for coming too fast.
Alphabittle Blossomforth tries to encourage her, but the harm is already done.
They're concerned that Izzy won't be able to handle all the ponies at once.
But she's an alicorn and can endure the whole gang.
Pegassi throw their balls around again shoving Sunny to the ground. Izzy joins the group with her own shiny balls.
The moistness on Pipp's hooves is more than she can handle. She tries to wing it but tentacles bind her up. She watched enough hentai to know where that is going.
Sunny is judgemental about that but ends up joining, also getting wrapped in tentacles.
With so much abuse going on, Sunny regrets bringing magic back to Equestria. But there's no stopping this train. The group descends on her, making her almost drown in the juices.
Sunny dreamed of a group union but all races were emptied. Unsatisfied, she runs away.
Pipp wants to do it in public, but at the same time, she doesn't want to be seen drenched in tentacles and juices.
The Queen tries to restore Sunny's mojo.
Sunny has a flashback of getting combined juices splattered on her face.
She realizes that when her friends shove in sync, they can come together. She likes that.
The Queen suggests organizing another gang. Banging the balls is the end goal, after all.
Sunny stops holding back and reveals that she's a screamer.
She makes them understand that it's not about coming to the end but about doing it. Doing it in sync. Pushing forth together. All at once.
Instead of doing each race separately, she decides to mix things up and do them together.
Equestria is about the union of all.
The session starts anew.
They all gave their best and Sunny declares all the winners for doing it.
"It's a tie", she reveals her bondage fetish.
All of Equestria united in this and Sunny was at the center of it all. Just the way she liked it. She was pleased.
Izzy, however, was still unsatisfied. It was up to Sunny and the rest to please her.

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