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Foal Star


Just a Brony who writes fun Fanfiction

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  • 4 weeks
    Eight years

    I have officially been on Fimfiction for 8 years!? It doesn't even feel like it's been that long. Well, I'll probably be writing Fimfiction for another few years. Time flies, and I have to say that despite all the time it takes to write my stories, it's well worth it. I really don't plan on stopping, as this is a way to keep myself busy, and overall, I enjoy writing my crazy stories and seeing

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  • 8 weeks
    Ranking every episode in Season Six based on personal preference.

    Season 6

    1st place: Gauntlet of Fire

    2nd place: To Where and Back Again, parts 1 & 2

    3rd place: The Times are a Changeling

    4th place: The Crystalling Parts 1 & 2

    5th place: Saddle Row & Rec

    6th place: A Hearth's Warming Tail

    7th place: No Second Prances

    8th Place: Stranger than Fan Fiction

    9th Place: The Gift of the Maud Pie

    10th place: Viva Las Pegasus

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  • 8 weeks
    To Where and Back again Parts One and Two

    This is the Season Six Finale, and I have to admit this was really good as it did a fantastic job wrapping up the season's main plot points very well and gave us more world-building with the Changelings. I mainly liked how it was centered around Starlight Glimmer, as most of the episodes focused on her dealing with her past and making amends, and this was the ultimate challenge for her not to

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  • 8 weeks
    Thoughts on Top Bolt

    This is another episode I felt like abit out of place, but I did enjoy watching it as I relate to Vapor Trail a lot. The idea of this episode is mainly centered around two ponies: a shy, somewhat nervous mare named Vapor Trail and a stallion Pegasus, who is rather full of himself named Sky Stinger. The two usually work as a team as new cadets training to be a part of the Wonderbolt Academy, but

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  • 8 weeks
    Thoughts on Where the Apple Lies

    This episode is one that I would not expect to be in season six, but it was one of my favorite episodes in the season, given how it gives us some backstory to the Apples, which I honestly enjoy when an episode focuses on the Apple family. The episode is basiclly a fable to teach Apple Bloom about telling lies and how Applejack got herself into a heap of trouble lying to Filthy Rich about selling

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May
24th
2022

Thoughts on the episodes Princess Twilight Sparkle parts 1 and 2 · 4:45am May 24th, 2022

So, after the disappointing episode that was the season three ending, I have to say the season four opener makes up for that and is my favorite opening to a season of MLP FIM. This episode brings so much to the table with us being able to see the past where Celestia and Luna fought each other and how they defeated Discord, to the Tree of Harmony being revealed. There was a lot to unpack just from that alone; then we see the friendship of the mane six tested as Twilight's friends make a point seeing that they were trying to protect her just in case the other princesses were gone. Then they relinquished their elements to save the princesses, and they learned to trust each other more in their friendship than in the elements of harmony. Also, it's apparent Discord was being set up to become a bigger threat seeing he planted those seeds and probably was influencing them in the background. I think critically; you can say the two episodes were a mess, with Twilight literally going back and forth from finding the tree of harmony. But overall, it was good to see Twilight experiencing a crisis of faith in herself and the episode making Discord a much more cunning villain than before. I also loved seeing Twilight having to look back in time which was without a doubt the reason why I love this episode so much. It was heartwrenching to see Celestia almost die in this episode without at first knowing it was in the past. I loved how it shows that Twilight and Princess Celestia have a powerful bond with each other, and I always struggle with this episode seeing Celestia almost die like that. I would be crying alongside Twilight if I saw that with her. So again, this isn't a review, and I'm not a critic. I love this opener for Twilight's glimpse into the past mostly, and that's about it.

Random thoughts

The Royal guards are so useless that they don't notice tendrils of evil enchanted vines kidnapping the princesses. They literally have to be told what to do by Twilight; it's why I love messing with them in my stories, lol.

Discord in that maid uniform gave me the idea for the story "The Maid of Chaos," which was fun to write.

Fluttershy is the best in this episode seeing her not only giving Discord a chance but threatening him in the end. Some would say she's naive with her friendship with Discord. But she's the reason why he's "reformed" and isn't causing too much chaos. Overall she as a character came a long way from season one.

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Comments ( 3 )

Why did Discord use Gummy as a nail file?

5659599
Not sure that's Discord for ya

5659612
Yeah, but it seemed like animal cruelty

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