May
1st
2022
Once more my ideas ran away with me. · 12:14pm May 1st, 2022
So I rewriting chapter 14 of Prince of Dreams. I realized I was writing more filler to make the chapter longer than it needed to be. Among my sins was rehashing info I already had in earlier chapters, like how Celestia wasn't the skilled Diplomate and chess master we see in the show. How she doubted herself.
Redoing it and hopefully, it wouldn't be too long till I post the story. After this, I do some Epilogue info, so I really have to pull everything together in a satisfying climax.
just wondering how many more chapters do you have planned for this fic?
In truth just two. Chapter 14 and an Epilogue.
That’s why it taking a bit more time with these final chapters I’m trying to finish off loose ends. Answer questions, but not repeating myself (so I been rereading earlier chapters) and trying not to add things that wouldn’t be cliff hanging.
My goal was to take the arrival to Equestria, something other HiE stories have just one chapter, one paragraph, or just jump into Equestria with no explanation. That I stretched as long as I could within a logical story.
I am thinking of a sequel titled “Morpheus, the Prince of Dreams” where he learns about the Equestria he arrived in. I’m not sure when I will start that one.