Chapter 18 is up, where things still don't go our hero's way. Also, Pirates! · 2:02pm Apr 29th, 2022
Ohhh, look at those guns, would brass even work well for a gun, or chrome... ehhh why not.
So story wise, I'm still going over the edits, but near the end before righting new chapters. I think I'm finally at the end of any major edits, other then with adding two of the new characters I put in. lots of fun stuff, and further flushing out Lotter and the shit she has to deal with. Same old same old. there are one or two more parts I might come back to and change up, one giving her a harder time, and another to look at and maybe change again... such is life.
As for the pirates, I decided to change up the guns, have them be highly rust resistant due to all the sea water their around. Also Brass, as their are sailors and such. So their guns became a carom and brass mess, a beltful mess. Though lore wise, not all their guns are like that, many being cheep and dumped in rust resistant paint. but the high quality Pirate guns would be some of the best guns you can get if it were a game, second to only high tech guns.
That all aside, How would you handle Lottery's situation in this chapter if you were in her position?
