Success

My first story Too much gossip was just approved. I hope you all like it. And, please be honest with me about what you think. I want to make good stories for you all to enjoy.

Comments

[EverfreePony]

Hi there! Late congratulations on your story's approval.

I'm not really into stories about sex, though a glance at the story thumbnail still provides me with a little thing to talk about. Remember that if you want your story to do well and entice as many potential readers as possible, its short and long descriptions need to be absolutely error-free. (The same goes for the story itself.) I'd suggest getting an editor if you don't have one. You can easily ask for their services in groups like this one.

Now, the short description contains quite a lot of errors:

Rainbow live stream a private conversation with rarity

Instead, it should look like this:

Rainbow live streams a private conversation with Rarity.

Content-wise it's rather good though. Provides an idea of what's the story going to be about, and it has the potential to hook the readers.

[PinkV5]

Thank you so much for the info. I thought u had to hire an editor or something. I don't really have money for it either. But with this, you've helped me in a big way.

[EverfreePony]

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And no worries, most editors on this site work for free just because they want to help--it's nice to pay them if you can, since editing may be a pretty taxing process, but most people on this site don't even thing about paying for editing. Also, between you and me, most editors on this site who require payment are not worth their salt...