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Cold Spike


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  • 16 weeks
    Happy New Years

    2023 was way too long.

    My goal this year is to find a new job. Try and write more than one new chapter of Feather Steel and to hopefully publish this new story of mine which popped into my head and won't leave. Already written 20,000 words. :twilightsheepish:

    As for my other unfinished works, we'll see. :facehoof:

    4 comments · 78 views
  • 24 weeks
    The Curse is Broken

    So, yeah, finally a new chapter is here.

    What can I say other than time goes by fast and you never realize how much you lose until it's lost. Five years :fluttershysad:

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    4 comments · 189 views
  • 25 weeks
    Sooooon....

    It is coming.

    8 comments · 170 views
  • 41 weeks
    The Difficulty of Continuing a Story

    Why is it so difficult to do this sometimes? I feel like it's much, much easier to come up with a new story and write it out. But Celestia help you if you stop and want to continue later. :facehoof:

    8 comments · 156 views
  • 41 weeks
    A Rushed Job

    I'm Back from TrotCon which was fun, though I feel they planned poorly for how large the venue was vs how many people were there (last time it was in a smaller hotel and felt cozy).

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    2 comments · 121 views
Jan
13th
2022

Re-write of Chapter One · 6:12am Jan 13th, 2022

Come out and check it here: chapter-one-nightmares-realm

I decided to try and curve some of my nastier habits when it comes to writing. It's now more concise, makes more sense, has 90% less adverbs and 100% more descriptions and showing.

I had a lot of extra help from a few friends, including Witchery

Report Cold Spike · 185 views · Story: Reflection of Nightmares · #Rewrite
Comments ( 2 )

has 90% less adverb

AHA!

I recognize that hatred for all words ending in "-ly" anywhere. You 're another writer who has read or listened to Stephen King's On Writing.

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I'm afraid not. :rainbowkiss:

A new friend showed me some things that I'm doing wrong, then I found this

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