Re-write of Chapter One · 6:12am Jan 13th, 2022
Come out and check it here: chapter-one-nightmares-realm
I decided to try and curve some of my nastier habits when it comes to writing. It's now more concise, makes more sense, has 90% less adverbs and 100% more descriptions and showing.
I had a lot of extra help from a few friends, including Witchery
AHA!
I recognize that hatred for all words ending in "-ly" anywhere. You 're another writer who has read or listened to Stephen King's On Writing.
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I'm afraid not.
A new friend showed me some things that I'm doing wrong, then I found this