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KarmaSentinal


Inspiring drifter in the sea of the written language.

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  • 5 weeks
    Not dead, here's a snippet to make it up.

    While I've been taking a really long break, I'm still writing while I can. Looking back, I was pushing a chapter nearly every month, and it finally caught up with me. Because of this, I'm trying another approach I've wanted to do for awhile, which was waiting until the story was finished first before publishing it slowly over a couple of weeks. For Colonel Hooves, there will be three chapters

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  • 37 weeks
    Colonel Hooves nearing the end, what are some plot points you feel need addressing?

    Hello people!

    Chapter 28 is finished, and I'll be starting the edits real soon, and with its completion I was left with the realization the story is finally reaching the end. I suspect another two chapters minimum before I write up an epilogue to wrap the story up, and this left me in a spot...

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  • 39 weeks
    Colonel Hooves chapters being resumed.

    Hello, I just wanted to make a quick post that after taking a break to focus work on another story, that I'll be resuming work on Colonel Hooves. I'm about 6k into the next chapter with a possible 5k more to be added.

    Here's a sneak peek!

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  • 56 weeks
    Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 Preview.

    Just a small preview of the upcoming chapter, and I'm happy to note we passed 5k words and are on trajectory to reaching 10k very soon!

    “Order and Harmony, how can a single room fill me with such disdain to work, and actively seek a reason to escape its encompassing walls?”

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  • 57 weeks
    Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 update.

    Nothing extraordinary to say other then the changes have taking effect for good. My chapters will be much longer then before so be ready to read some chunkers in the coming months, because chapter 27 is already 4k words and all of that is just talking filler and none of the plot. I'm projecting another 10-12k chapter by the end of the month.

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Dec
3rd
2021

Slight continuity mistake · 4:29pm Dec 3rd, 2021

Ok, so I had an ending planned and partially written up, but after doing some research discovered I introduced Flurry Heart way too early. This doesn't mean the story is anywhere close to being finished! I just wanted have it ready so I can know how to bring the story together.

I thought about correcting this but realize it'll take too much effort to rework all of the chapters, and actually slow down the story even more. The idea was to follow Vdrake's story by showing Idol's life during some of the show's more impressive moments, but since this is an AU story I'm just going to change the order of these events. For example, the Flurry Heart season opener will happen first before Tirek attacks, or Twilight becomes a princess. A small change that should(n't) affect the story too much, but I thought should be pointed out.

With that said I'm going to resume writing very soon since I managed to pick up writing for another story of mine located here for those that might be interested. Cheers!

Comments ( 4 )

A small mistake that should affect the story too much?
i think ya made a typo :derpytongue2:

Oh it affects the story. :pinkiecrazy:

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alicorns so OP there born before conception

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LOL. In earlier chapters I already hinted, and showed Cadence was pregnant, but since I stopped watching the show around season 4 got the timing of certain events out of order. So, this will be the new cannon!

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